Filed Under (Poems) by ivy on May-31-2007

Inner Beauty

A peaceful swan on a lake

Just might make

A little egg on the shore

For everyone to adore

For when he is older you shall see

What a beautiful bird he can be!

Daddy on May 31st, 2007 at 9:21 am #

That is very pretty. I want to read more poems and stories like that.
Daddy

Mom on May 31st, 2007 at 11:01 am #

Great Job !!! I look forward everyday to reading more.
Mom

Nana on June 1st, 2007 at 4:53 pm #

Hi Ivy,
This swan poem reminds me of seeing swans on a little pond in a park in Ireland. Did you know Mam likes swans? You should send this to her. She would love it. Your poem in so beautiful. It is my favorite so far!
I love you so much,
Your Nana

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